Karzkin

So I've had this one sitting in an open tab for a few days now. Finally I'm going to review it. Hooray for you.. Straight off the bat, let's talk ...

Hey Other Blues. Welcome to the traps. Ok, I dig the idea here, but man, it needs some editing. First, the epigraph. I am a fan of epigraphs when they're ...

I'm sorry to hear you lost the original. Maybe try writing in a word document then copy and pasting to yws? Anyway, review time. Ok, so I'm not really digging ...

Hi aouther2b! Interesting name, I didn't actually notice the 2b until after blinking in shock at the fact this is a featured work. Let me reiterate, it's not your fault ...

Hey Rainn, sorry it's been so long. Life and such, y'know. Ok, so I'm not really digging this poem terribly much. The topic is a potentially powerful one, and your ...

Foxy, I don't think we've met. Call me K. Your poem. I dig the intention, and I can clearly see what you were aiming for, but this one needs a ...

Padawano, Like I said, I am impressed. This is by far your best work to date. Cole's analysis was thorough (last stanza notwithstanding), so I'll skip that and go straight ...

Hello cC. Here, as promised. Correct me if I'm wrong, but forays into poetry seem to be rare for you. I cannot even recall your last one. I'm a bit ...

Hey Padawan. I lost you earlier so I came here. The more and more I read your stuff the more your penchant for refrains grows on me. It's a personal ...

Rosey, You've already had some heavy hitters down here give you some technical workouts, so I'll go somewhere a little airier (but, for the record, I agree wholeheartedly with Kylan). ...

Remember when I promised to review this? Well here I am, making good on that. Also, I'll take this opportunity to kill two birds with one stone and talk about ...

You never returned T__T So I'll give it to you here. Prose poetry eh? Unusual for you. Why the change? Anyway, down to business. I'm not digging the start. Distance ...

Hey Other Lumi. Good to see you producing. It's been a little while since you have, hasn't it? So, this one. First, what's with 'ov'? There had better be a ...

Thank you darling

Welcome, friend. Prepare for a Killa Kritique. First, (and this is just a style thing) there is no real need to capitalise the first word of each line or to ...