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This was an excerpt from our DTWH xD I didn't expect it to be posted on here too.

Thank you for clearing that up for me. c: Can't wait to see what happens next.

The prologue was not bad, it did get me curious of how it will collaborate with the storyline itself. That would be an interesting challenge you can do. You're not ...

Thanks for the advice!

I am awake now. And I don't know if I want improve anything with this story xD It was simply a random thing I came up with. Buuuuut, I guess ...

Oh that makes sense now. Thank you for clearing that up xD For real, I thought they were all six.

It's good to try out genre you don't work with. It wasn't a bad horror prompt. The more you write in this genre, the better you will get. Don't give ...

This was written in first person POV... so the name of the Main Character is usually said by another character or he will introduce himself.

It's hard for me to describe settings, but I will try to do that too!

Thanks for the review. I understand what you're coming from. I have never suffered from panic attacks, so I am sorry for offending you D: I do have tweak with ...

Ohh! That makes sense!

No problem! c:

Well, to me, I don't think you were overly descriptive. And when I usually write, I just think of a good stopping point. I can't really tell you to change ...

No problem! I actually enjoyed reading this. When you post more, I'll definitely do better at critiquing and providing tips for you, if needed.

Hi, Morgana666. I want to read this and leave you a review, but it's hard to read this story when the format makes part of your story cut off. If ...