KanenRenoir

An end to a sentence. Like a question mark. .

i really enjoyed reading and thought that it sounded like a story that could be really good.

I rather liked it. I thought your story was well written and your plot was very interesting. I would love to see what you have next.

Yeah, I had forgotten to mention that I'd just finished typing the part when I posted it, so there was bound to be a ton of errors. Thanks for reading ...

Like stated, this is only the first chapter. I know where its going, at least for a while, and when I written some more I post. Thanks for reading and ...

moved

Yeah, unfortunately, I have some good friends who do a really amazing job at finding errors. Thanks for reading. I have the second chapter written, just don't know if I ...