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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Encore

    Hi Earendil, thanks again for the review on my piece Plums. I appreciate it, consider this calling it even. This is interesting to say the least. Though completely gimmicky, it ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Fall

    Hi Lad, nice to see your work around. I've finally made it. I'm iffy about this piece. Not sure how to approach nor how to interpret it nor how to ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lost Horse

    Hi Ky, you observed this and we talked about it. But I'll leave this here for you nonetheless because I added in some more thoughts. There's a man out to ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Seven Sketches of Christ

    Hi Eli, nice to see a new face. I'm sorry I didn't get to this last night. I'm not going to look at each individual poem and going to keep ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No. 3

    Hi Bolshevik, thought I'd drop in and leave my thoughts. Generally, this is a classy response to issues we have eh? I think so. But otherwise. What in the world ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Got thicket juice in my pocket.

    My dear, you never fail to impress it's good to see your work. I'm going to keep this short because only one thing that bothered me. Everything is so delicately ...

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Deleted 10

    Hey Lumsters. You asked me long ago what I thought of your poems, so I think it's about time I gave you a review. Excited? Slightly Nervous? Terrified out of ...

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drawn Onward

    Hey Kafka. Finally got around to this. I typed up the lecture and MeanMrMustard threw his thoughts into the quote of your poem below. Writer's pad are handy dandy when ...

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As if I Never Existed

    Hi Matt, I'm pretty surprised you have three featured pieces. But a review for you: Trying to break my own knife, and failing to dust my lost pen. To write ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: lovenotes

    Hi Penezeka, a review as promised. This is worse then the last poem I reviewed. As lovely as the people you get advice from (and no offense to them), stop ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Unfinished Apology

    I've been meaning to take a look at your poetry. Scared yet? I'll keep this short because I'm tired. This seems oh-so-very gimmicky to me. Crammed to the point of ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Normandy

    Hi Lad :3 As promised. Oi vey, I'm tired. If this didn't make sense at some parts, it's early in the morning. Please excuse me and come for clarifications

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Havisham Dancer

    Hi Persephoneia, I'm not going to be subtle about this, but I never am. This above me is completely disorganized, it wants to be a poem and it tries sooo ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Poetry, like an insidiously rhyming, cacophony

    I clearly have all these YWS boys madly in love with me. I owe you like a million reviews, so spot saved for a critique. --- I like this a ...

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Disasterpiece

    So, I said I would review a piece of yours. So here I am. Bear with me though, it's been a while. I'm not a big fan of this either. ...

    Feb 1, 2011


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