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Pen!! *snugs* This was BRILLIANT! I love this and i showed my friend she broke down crying from laughter my skool is not twilight obessed and I read it before ...

Hey Eggs! You asked for a review so here I am! Now let's see (you have lots of great critiques already, so this may seen a little repetitive) Okay this ...

Hey Chips! I am going to be your reviewer today! (Yay!) Okay I really enjoyed this poem. It was simple and clear, and the metaphors are great! My biggest complaints ...

Okay as ordered (is this the wrong story?If so I'll do another just PM my the link) *You owe me a review* This story was intense and very well done, ...

When I read this I thought it was really interesting. The last story I read in the perspective of someone dead was very good so my expectations were a little ...

I'm sorry to admit that I agree with Peanut & Firestarter...(and Bubbles) Your poem isn't really a poem. It seems like a random rant or email or something... Maybe try ...

hey there im not a greeter but Welcome to YWS um i completely agree with Sam this sounds exactly like Twilight right now u have to be careful with that ...

Wow I really loved this i disagree i loved the ending really good job I liked how you made it seem like e said no but it turns out in ...

OMG I read every single chapter I LOVED IT SO MUCH :D Its amazing how talented some ppl r on this website U HAVE TO PM ME WEN U GET ...

Wow ur piece REALLLY GOOD i totally hands down agree with u about the innonence being obilerated from this world Even though im only thirteen it bugs me SOOOOO much ...

Surprisingly I actually get this Sure mi brain is messed up and has a weird logic but hey wat can i do? Ok most people went through the nitpicks my ...

This is really nice! I really liekd this poem its simple and creative! most of the nit picks ill drop casue i like it but the one thing that bugs ...

Omg I was waiting for this!! I loved this one to!!!!!!! Imma curious human being and ur feeding that curiousity just rite! YAAA I cant wait to find out about ...

Ok I adored this! I printed it off to keep... i really think this is brilliant I like the goth perspective on an angels... The fact that you give info ...

I really liked that and dont hav much to say about it actually I agree with tori1234 the flow is lost in the first stanza but u pick it up ...