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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: sunday spices

    Penezenka, I said I'd review one of your things and boom! Here I am. We all know you can twirl us into a colourful and image-filled frenzy, flow is lovely ...

    Sep 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Kiss the Sound of Losing Face

    Hi Dreameh. Ack. Kiss the sound of losing face. Taste it on the tip of your tongue These lines have so much potential in the mist of so little. Two ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Paper Cups

    Hi Benway, rather then having to clarify all this lovely information after, we should have come away with a clear understanding of the more important parts of your poem in ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pizarro

    Karzkin, as promised. I'm conflicted about this piece, and this piece itself is as conflicted as the Spaniards and Incas (but not in a good, I intended this to be ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: unnamed

    Hi AM, what this suffers is iamtryingtobedeepandfailing Syndrome. Just because you're dressing your words up like puppets doesn't give the poem itself anymore depth. when the blind follow the deaf ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: seven headed breakup poem

    Alrighty perdido c: Interesting, you've got such a particular style it's hard not to enjoy it. It's got some flaws due to my own taste but this is swell. I ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Butterflies

    Hi Mikko, as requested, and you are my 350th review that I should have gotten ages ago. This is less poetry then it is a inner dialogue. It's dull, evokes ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love's Introspection

    Hi Suzanne, nice to see you around again. This is dull and the words don't have the strength to drive in the meaning you took time to carefully explain afterwards. ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Written In This Skin

    Youwiththeface, over there. Yea you. I already told you that I think this is wonderful. And unlike Pengu, think it's the best thing I've seen from you (so far) but ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mother

    Hi Inkwell. I have this tendency to begin writing reviews in word docs and forgetting to finish or post them. Here we go: You've tried so hard to get us ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Airbag

    Lad, I had half a review written up from like a week or so ago in a word doc for you and I stumbled upon it. It's only fair to ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the inklings

    Hey Azila, This is wonderful if your attempt was to thread together pretty words into an incomprehensible stack.Your attempt at being 'poetic' is lost in the fact that simply what ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: voiles and tulles

    Kylan, this is going to take a while to read (for me, not you) -- but since you know exactly what you're doing I'll keep each one to a brief ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Welfare babies.

    Hi Jasmine, Let us begin! I wrote this a few weeks ago while at an appointment. I don't like it much. I don't understand it much either. If you don't ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Your Ad Here

    'Ello Inkwell. Aren't you just so clever addressing media so cynically. In reality, this was pretentious enough to make me cough. You're excitedly feeding me this information that's rather meaningless

    Jun 21, 2011


One is not born, but rather becomes a woman.
— Simone de Beauvoir, The Second Sex