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Re: sunday spices
Penezenka, I said I'd review one of your things and boom! Here I am. We all know you can twirl us into a colourful and image-filled frenzy, flow is lovely ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Kiss the Sound of Losing Face
Hi Dreameh. Ack. Kiss the sound of losing face. Taste it on the tip of your tongue These lines have so much potential in the mist of so little. Two ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Paper Cups
Hi Benway, rather then having to clarify all this lovely information after, we should have come away with a clear understanding of the more important parts of your poem in ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Pizarro
Karzkin, as promised. I'm conflicted about this piece, and this piece itself is as conflicted as the Spaniards and Incas (but not in a good, I intended this to be ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: unnamed
Hi AM, what this suffers is iamtryingtobedeepandfailing Syndrome. Just because you're dressing your words up like puppets doesn't give the poem itself anymore depth. when the blind follow the deaf ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: seven headed breakup poem
Alrighty perdido c: Interesting, you've got such a particular style it's hard not to enjoy it. It's got some flaws due to my own taste but this is swell. I ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Butterflies
Hi Mikko, as requested, and you are my 350th review that I should have gotten ages ago. This is less poetry then it is a inner dialogue. It's dull, evokes ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Love's Introspection
Hi Suzanne, nice to see you around again. This is dull and the words don't have the strength to drive in the meaning you took time to carefully explain afterwards. ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Written In This Skin
Youwiththeface, over there. Yea you. I already told you that I think this is wonderful. And unlike Pengu, think it's the best thing I've seen from you (so far) but ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Mother
Hi Inkwell. I have this tendency to begin writing reviews in word docs and forgetting to finish or post them. Here we go: You've tried so hard to get us ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Airbag
Lad, I had half a review written up from like a week or so ago in a word doc for you and I stumbled upon it. It's only fair to ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: the inklings
Hey Azila, This is wonderful if your attempt was to thread together pretty words into an incomprehensible stack.Your attempt at being 'poetic' is lost in the fact that simply what ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: voiles and tulles
Kylan, this is going to take a while to read (for me, not you) -- but since you know exactly what you're doing I'll keep each one to a brief ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Welfare babies.
Hi Jasmine, Let us begin! I wrote this a few weeks ago while at an appointment. I don't like it much. I don't understand it much either. If you don't ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Your Ad Here
'Ello Inkwell. Aren't you just so clever addressing media so cynically. In reality, this was pretentious enough to make me cough. You're excitedly feeding me this information that's rather meaningless
Jun 21, 2011
