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Alright. So, I thought this was lovely. The whole tying together was very nicely done. Recursive, if I=N(_)/{AT, CG} then I can only sum it's parts with a hole. Quite ...

Razzleberry! *slobbers* I shall review this now :D Let us begin - Nit picks: First things first, when you start your poem off with a typo, it makes a reader ...

Here I am! This is lovely my dear! Now, I'm really liking the image of the sailor. A cigarette perched on his lip, white with a colored tip, like the ...

Okay, review. I'm going to say I greatly, greatly enjoyed that. This piece, compared to all the pieces you posted over the last little while really shines. The subtle imagery ...

Most of us don't bite. Unforunately I do. So brace yourself eh? ;) Now, this is just two cents before I pass out. You're asking a specific person very personal ...

Hello there, First thing I'm going to say is that your overuse of the lovely thing called alliteration makes this slightly hard to swallow. That repetition of the same sound ...

So, hello there Management. You want us to tell you if it's rubbish, but still be nice? Seems to defeat the purpose, but I shall tell you this needs a ...

One note, that turned me from hesitant to not wanting to review this at all: WARNING: THINGS THAT HAPPEN IN THE POEM ARE NOT MEANT FOR YOU TO DO IN ...

So, hello there Hidden. To tell you the truth, I read the first stanza and stopped there for a moment. I simply skimmed the rest. I groaned inwardly and decided ...

Okay Galerius Valerius Maximianus, time for me to stretch my fingers. So content wise. If you cleared up the first bit as you said, it shows. The idea you have ...

Hello there Metalamor, I guess I'll drop a note before I head out. I didn't actually enjoy this. On thing I'd like to point out to you is a consistency ...

Hi Lived! Well, I could argue how well it turned out, but that isn't much help now is it? I'm just going to give you my two cents. Firstly, what ...

Hi fhwdf. Now this is interesting. My biggest concern would be: What exactly are you talking about? I get the vibe of madness, music, slight anger at the beginning. But ...

Hey Halycon! I'm so sorry I didn't get here sooner! I'm really happy to see that you took all the advice from your last poem and applied it here. You ...

Hey Halycon! Sorry for taking so long to get to this. I've been really busy. Now, I commend you for trying your hand at symbolic poetry. It's refreshing to read ...