Kamas

Alright cool cat, here we go: This entire poem (like math) is cold and sterile. And because you depend on physics/ academic terms for your imgery, they have no feeling, ...

Alright, remember you asked for this. This poem in general oozes teenage angst, out of the ears and skin pores. The kind that's "Oh, I'm so alone and misunderstood, let ...

Gah, I'm finally here, and your poem isn't down yet. :P I win. Overall, this poem is good, but it's barely standing. You've thrown around too man ideas, it's like ...

I'm not sure if this is the one you wanted me to pick at, but either way I'm really sorry I'm so late >.< Let's see: The biggest problem in ...

I doubt if I hadn't mentioned it you'd find another excuse to ax it down. Since I spent so long working on this review, it's only fair to myself that ...

:O You get to be my first critique with 5 stars. Anyways to work: Carnival I don't feel the link between the depression glass and the water is extended to ...

Alrighty Conrad. It seems like one of those "ohnoessadfacerelationship" poems. Except you had the decency to throw something more original in the mix. Disregarding this is from 2005, I'm honestly ...

Mm, lovely. I adore the sense of well, presence your poems have. You thread the poem so delicately, but it makes sense though they can get complicated and we feel ...

Oh wow. First review in a while. Hi! Welcome to YWS! First things first, we encourage you to review other works that way you'll get more reviews yourself and you ...

Hm. I'm not going to say I enjoyed it. But it was interesting. I've been trying to figure out whether you used an anapestic or amphibrachic meter but beside that, ...

Hi Jane :) Now, this has nice images associated with it. But it's a very simple image and a deeper meaning can be very easily associated with it, yet no ...

Hm. Well it's up to me to rain on the parade D: Sorry. So, I appreciate your ability to consider punctuation and capitalization as something flexible. But I think disregarding ...

Another girl stood up. “Heck yeah!” Kamas. Lulz, I'm such a keaner. At the end, Nate divided the room into continents and Canada and put them all head to head ...

So, here as requested Flower! Alright, I'm going to be completely honest with you and tell you I didn't like it. A 'profound' examination of teenage angst is still angst. ...

Alright, now that I have some time. The first stanza and the 'bottleneck' stanza are very strong. If you take the time to read the parenthetical dialogue and the dialogue ...