Kalliope

Wow. You did an amazing job at conveying your main character's emotions and I had tears in my eyes when I'd gotten to the end of this piece. Sentimental, I ...

Yeah, I intended to make it seem like she'd broken up with him, so I'm glad it came across that way :) I'm still arguing with myself about the name-thing. ...

I am so going to read this. I did some research about Sylvia Plath a while ago, but then forgot all about her. *runs off to find website again and ...

This is brilliant, but very, very disturbing. *shudders* My only complaint: I noticed the same thing about the age as JFW1415 did. She seems very young most of the time, ...

*hihihihihihihihihi* This was great fun to read! It matches "jingle bells" exactly and is very well done. All the critical points were already mentioned, so I can just say: Way ...

Definetly! I think turning away is a very good description, because when you turn away at the sight of someone screaming for help that means you're not planning to act, ...

I can't wait :D

hey, that's easy!! Linkin park "what I've done" :)

Impressing! I love it. It's smoothe and has original rhymes (not forced or anything) and it really does make you think plus I love dark stuff. Keep on writing!!

PLease tell me what you think!!

Wow this is really good! There are a few lines that seem a little long, but I love the story. A bit ironic, very sad and I'd say pretty real. ...