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Hi Jen, I liked this quite a lot and will be glad to give you a good crit on the edited version. Just drop me a line, if you want ...

Hey Rosie, I really liked this. Very wonderful atmospere and I had no problems at all when singing it, which means that your flow is is good and your meter ...

Hey Jared, sorry it took me so long to get to this, school has been eating me. You did a great job at bringing us back into the story and ...

Oh my, I'm taking way too much time with this. Anyway I've finished the part about Justin and I shall start Sarah as soon as I've posted it. I just ...

Hi Icaruss, here comes your review. Alright, first things first: This was a very hard piece for me to read. Somewhere in the middle of it, I was at the ...

Hi Leja, I can't believe it took me so long to get back to this and finally critique it. I absolutely love this. It was a wonderful light read with ...

Hey Loose, this was wonderful. You've drawn a beautiful picture; an outside view on the scene and so I can see this working as a prologue very well. View The ...

Hey OverEasy, I must say, I really enjoyed this. I love the way Jordan is a teenage rebel and her entire attitude is refreshing. She's not the stereotype teenage girl. ...

Hey OverEasy, I'm with Jared about the description. I think you have a very solid frame and nice dialog, but you could expand and specify by describing. This could really ...

Hi socunfused, I need to agree with Vernon on this one. Please use punctuation to make your work more tidy and attractive for the reader and also help you to ...

Very cute idea and I liked the way you lined up all the different cliches. Just one or two little nitpicks: Gazing at the stars, and think ing of you. ...

Hi Because :), welcome to the site. I really enjoyed reading this. Very unique. There are three places I'd change just to help the flow. They've already been pointed out ...

Hey Demeter, I thought this was cute although it didn't blow me off my feet admittedly I enjoyed the read. The last stanza was very unexpected which was good after ...

Hey New Writer! Don't be upset if you don't get so many critiques. You can always ask for some help in the Will review for food section or in the ...

Hey Demeter! This was really neat! Quirky, to steal 'Lainna's words :D A few suggestions: Like, who does she think she is, [s]anyway[/s]? In my eyes the anyway kind of ...