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Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.2 - #RememberNyssa
*insert pterodactyl screaming here* You know what? *insert infinite pterodactyl screaming here* The end of this chapter is, dare I say it, cute . And it is. So not. A ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.1 - #RememberNyssa
I think I'm in love with Nyssa because wow. Just wow. That revenge is just glorious and perfect and oh so satisfying, and I haven't even read the earlier chapters, ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.2 - Like a dog with a bone
Now this was a rather intense part, and that kissing scene was amazing on so many levels because the conflict that rages within Viggo as he's forcing (and then not ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.1 - Like a dog with a bone
Hello. I'm back again. And it is totally his dog. As cute as this chapter was, the whole dog acquisition felt very contrived, probably because of how sudden it was, ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 9.2 - The accomplice
Hello there, papillote! I'm here to review you this fine Review Day, and you'll have quite a few reviews incoming from me since I see many chapters of yours lurking ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Alphabet Soup
Hello. I am here as requested to review (and I'm actually in time to do a Green Room review :o). So, confession time, I don't really like this poem. I ...
Dec 6, 2016 -
Re: 暗殺者
I clicked on this because I was hoping it would be a work in Japanese, so I feel very misled. Why is the title in kanji while the rest is ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1.3 (Unknown Title)
This review has been brought to you by RevMo . Now, I haven't read the previous parts, so if I bring up something that was already addressed earlier in the ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Stevie's Stories Chapters 4-6
This review has been brought to you by RevMo . Now, I haven't read the previous parts, so if I bring up something that was already addressed earlier in the ...
Sep 24, 2016 -
Re: The Coming War/Chp. 2/ Wilh
This review has been brought to you by RevMo . Now, I haven't read the previous parts, so if I bring up something that was already addressed earlier in the ...
Sep 23, 2016 -
Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships
I don't know if you did it intentionally or not, but that last line is a gut-punching play on your username, and it's amazing. This is probably going to be ...
Jul 29, 2016 -
Re: Wise Sisters
And here I am, at long last, for the third of these. The lack of quotation marks in this was particularly jarring, and I think, of all three parts, this ...
May 16, 2016 -
Re: Young Gods
*comes crawling in months later* Hello Rubric. It's been a while, but I'm here at last to review these other two. Finally. For real this time. There were many aborted ...
May 16, 2016 -
Re: Bold Kings
You post things so rarely, but the things you do are worth the wait. With that said, I'm so very torn on how you handled the dialogue. On the one ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: Threshold
Hello there and happy Review Day! I'm here also on behalf of the Knights of the Green Room since your work has been trapped in there for so long. Since ...
Jan 31, 2016
