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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.2 - #RememberNyssa

    *insert pterodactyl screaming here* You know what? *insert infinite pterodactyl screaming here* The end of this chapter is, dare I say it, cute . And it is. So not. A ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.1 - #RememberNyssa

    I think I'm in love with Nyssa because wow. Just wow. That revenge is just glorious and perfect and oh so satisfying, and I haven't even read the earlier chapters, ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.2 - Like a dog with a bone

    Now this was a rather intense part, and that kissing scene was amazing on so many levels because the conflict that rages within Viggo as he's forcing (and then not ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.1 - Like a dog with a bone

    Hello. I'm back again. And it is totally his dog. As cute as this chapter was, the whole dog acquisition felt very contrived, probably because of how sudden it was, ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 9.2 - The accomplice

    Hello there, papillote! I'm here to review you this fine Review Day, and you'll have quite a few reviews incoming from me since I see many chapters of yours lurking ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Alphabet Soup

    Hello. I am here as requested to review (and I'm actually in time to do a Green Room review :o). So, confession time, I don't really like this poem. I ...

    Dec 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: 暗殺者

    I clicked on this because I was hoping it would be a work in Japanese, so I feel very misled. Why is the title in kanji while the rest is ...

    Dec 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1.3 (Unknown Title)

    This review has been brought to you by RevMo . Now, I haven't read the previous parts, so if I bring up something that was already addressed earlier in the ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Stevie's Stories Chapters 4-6

    This review has been brought to you by RevMo . Now, I haven't read the previous parts, so if I bring up something that was already addressed earlier in the ...

    Sep 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Coming War/Chp. 2/ Wilh

    This review has been brought to you by RevMo . Now, I haven't read the previous parts, so if I bring up something that was already addressed earlier in the ...

    Sep 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: chaos theory: a crash course my relationships

    I don't know if you did it intentionally or not, but that last line is a gut-punching play on your username, and it's amazing. This is probably going to be ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Wise Sisters

    And here I am, at long last, for the third of these. The lack of quotation marks in this was particularly jarring, and I think, of all three parts, this ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Young Gods

    *comes crawling in months later* Hello Rubric. It's been a while, but I'm here at last to review these other two. Finally. For real this time. There were many aborted ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Bold Kings

    You post things so rarely, but the things you do are worth the wait. With that said, I'm so very torn on how you handled the dialogue. On the one ...

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Literature, Supernatural Re: Threshold

    Hello there and happy Review Day! I'm here also on behalf of the Knights of the Green Room since your work has been trapped in there for so long. Since ...

    Jan 31, 2016


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