KalaAngel9

Hey, I really liked this passage! Your introduction is pretty strong, and I feel like the first few paragraphs introduce the main character and their past pretty well. I was ...

I personally really liked what you wrote. I think you introduce your character very well, and just by reading the first paragraph I could tell what kind of person they ...

Hello HolographicLadybug! I really liked this chapter. I think it's a great introduction to the story, and I hope to read more of it soon. I love how Angeni and ...

I really think this poem is wonderfully written and I enjoyed reading it. To improve your writing I think you could have used a richer selection of vocabulary and maybe ...