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Re: Telltale Tea
Ok, to clear it up, the girl was part of the couple, and she was so mad that night that she killed him. She was freaked out so she went ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: He's not quite ready
It's standalone. I'm not planning on writing more around it, but who knows?
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Self-Destruction
Yeah, I wasn't sure how confusing it would be... It's about this guy with a split personality who's married with a baby (Mike), but his other half (Cam) is in ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: nvm 2
Aww, my review isn't the first anymorw... it was when I first started writing it... Oh well. everyone else was faster.
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Writing to Show
I agree. It was well done discriptive wise, but I don't really know what's going on. Add more to it.
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: Romance Suggestions
i have already read Wicked Lovely and I loved Ashlin and Seth. ME TOO! I love that book!! I loved the ending, with Donia and Keenan and Seth and Ash. ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Romance Suggestions
Wicked Lovely is a really good paranormal romance. It's more complex than just girl-falls-for-paranormal-guy thing. It's about fairies. Really good. :)
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Love Ain't Easy Mac
Also, the first paragraph needs more snap to it that immediately gets the reader interested. Yeah, someone else said that too. I'll work on that when I get more time. ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: He's not quite ready
Thanks so much for all your comments and everything, guys! I really appreciate it and am happy you liked it so much. It's funny, because my friend told me a ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Falling for Jake
Well here you don't have recess unless you're in elementary school, so that's why to me, that seemed very strangely young to be up to those kinds of shananagans. also, ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: He's not quite ready
Thanks so much for all the comments! this is the first scene this... descriptive I've written, so it was sort of experimental. all the things you guys have said make ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: Produce Picture
*edited* everything after the set of "***" is new. So like from the phone call on.
Aug 27, 2008 -
Re: Elaine and Edward
i really liked the updates!! good job. there were still a few typos, but i'm not in the mood for nit-picking. lol. I think this story is really cute, and ...
Aug 8, 2008 -
Re: Lock and Key
I havent read it, but I LOVE her!!!! i really want to read this one, cuz I've liked all her other books.
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
Did anyone read the Breaking Dawn spoiler that Meyer released? It's kind of big, but I assumed that would happen so it didn't really surprise me. *resists clicking link* BREAKING ...
Jul 31, 2008
