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KailaMarie

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Telltale Tea

    Ok, to clear it up, the girl was part of the couple, and she was so mad that night that she killed him. She was freaked out so she went ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: He's not quite ready

    It's standalone. I'm not planning on writing more around it, but who knows?

    Mar 10, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Self-Destruction

    Yeah, I wasn't sure how confusing it would be... It's about this guy with a split personality who's married with a baby (Mike), but his other half (Cam) is in ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: nvm 2

    Aww, my review isn't the first anymorw... it was when I first started writing it... Oh well. everyone else was faster.

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Writing to Show

    I agree. It was well done discriptive wise, but I don't really know what's going on. Add more to it.

    Dec 11, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Romance Suggestions

    i have already read Wicked Lovely and I loved Ashlin and Seth. ME TOO! I love that book!! I loved the ending, with Donia and Keenan and Seth and Ash. ...

    Dec 3, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Romance Suggestions

    Wicked Lovely is a really good paranormal romance. It's more complex than just girl-falls-for-paranormal-guy thing. It's about fairies. Really good. :)

    Dec 2, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love Ain't Easy Mac

    Also, the first paragraph needs more snap to it that immediately gets the reader interested. Yeah, someone else said that too. I'll work on that when I get more time. ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: He's not quite ready

    Thanks so much for all your comments and everything, guys! I really appreciate it and am happy you liked it so much. It's funny, because my friend told me a ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Falling for Jake

    Well here you don't have recess unless you're in elementary school, so that's why to me, that seemed very strangely young to be up to those kinds of shananagans. also, ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: He's not quite ready

    Thanks so much for all the comments! this is the first scene this... descriptive I've written, so it was sort of experimental. all the things you guys have said make ...

    Sep 23, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Produce Picture

    *edited* everything after the set of "***" is new. So like from the phone call on.

    Aug 27, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Elaine and Edward

    i really liked the updates!! good job. there were still a few typos, but i'm not in the mood for nit-picking. lol. I think this story is really cute, and ...

    Aug 8, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Lock and Key

    I havent read it, but I LOVE her!!!! i really want to read this one, cuz I've liked all her other books.

    Aug 6, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    Did anyone read the Breaking Dawn spoiler that Meyer released? It's kind of big, but I assumed that would happen so it didn't really surprise me. *resists clicking link* BREAKING ...

    Jul 31, 2008


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