Kaia

It looks better! You could also maybe use a comma if you think that looks better. So glad to be of help to you!! heart

I'm so happy that you find my suggestions helpful!! I love reviewing for you because you are so open to improvement!

Whoa....now I see why that took half an hour to compose xD

Ahh!! You're reviews are so great. Can't begin to thanking for dropping by so much!! I really don't have experience writing emergencies so that's rather why I had my characters ...

Hey, Raven!! Ooh thanks!! I really struggle with writing Jed. (May become more obvious later on, oops) I would love more reviews. Especially on the coming chapter because I am ...

Thank you so much for your comment! I always appreciate it. I don't think either of us had a romantic interest in each other, but we did get a long ...

My nursing class began with 25 students. Now we are down to a sad 7, following this classmate's departure. To date, none of us remaining students know if we will ...

Years later, and this still gets loved and enjoyed. heart

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Ohhh whoaaa!!! Thanks for dropping by!! I didnt expect you to drop me another review, but thanks so much for doing that!! Huh. That sentence does strike me as a ...

I always have to think outside the box hehe. I figured it wasnt eye contacts but you know...have to consider everything hehe.

Hiya! Im not good at reviewing poetry so I'll leave you a lil comment instead. :D I loved all the imagery you put into this! All the descriptions and things ...

I realize I never replied to this truly amazing review!! I'm so sorry!! Thank for you commenting! Your suggestions are right on board and I definitely need to look into ...

Hi reader! Thanks for dropping by!! If you'd like to help me out, I'm concerned about pacing and choppiness so any comments on that would be great!! -Kaia heart

I'm glad. I just don't want to hurt anyone's feelings. :D