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Kaia

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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Mad- Chapter 2

    Hello, hello! I have come to review this little piece I noticed in the green room. I review as I go. Let's get into it! The tea was made of ...

    Sep 7, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction Re: Bliss Was Ignorance: Chapter 2

    There was no way to remove the OpticLens chip from her brain without the risk of permanent damage, so they left it there. Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. WHAT?? Okay before ...

    Sep 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 8 The travel of self Part 1

    Greetings! I have come to review for you. As always, I will be reviewing as I read. Here goes! So the opening line I felt was just a little weak. ...

    Sep 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: i never forget things, so everything becomes a memory of you

    Hello, herbs. It is time I reviewed for a friend. Here goes! As always, I review as I read. Let's go! So first I had to look over the format ...

    Sep 3, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 7

    Hello! Tryna keep up with RevMo and stumbled upon this piece. So here comes a review for yah! I will be reviewing as I go like I always do :D ...

    Sep 2, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 1

    Greetings! I have come to review this piece. I will be reviewing as I read so this review will be in chronological order. Shall we begin? All right. I love ...

    Sep 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: I Like to Think I'm an Author

    Oooh I really liked the read! You used some great metaphors such as about being a puppeteer or time traveler. All of those sound like such exciting venues and added ...

    Aug 10, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: ankyl-atel-form

    Now that this piece is out of the green room I feel a slight bit more comfortable reviewing as it is poetry and that is admittedly not my strong point ...

    Jun 30, 2024
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Literature Re: Call of the Depths

    Hmmm what a piece I appear to have stumbled upon! Let's get right into it! So the very first thing that really popped out to me is the writing style. ...

    Jun 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative Re: Reflecting Hearts - Ch. 10.1 - Kaleidoscope of Dreams and Treachery

    Hi, hi! Kaia here to review again :D Let's get right into it! I loosened my grip around him as we slowed to a stop. He cut off the engine, ...

    Jun 20, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative Re: Reflecting Hearts - Ch. 11 - Bon appétit: Serving Truth at Dinner

    Hi, hi! Saw a lonely work over here and decided to stop by. Keep in mind this is one of my first chapters I'm reading here so things may not ...

    Jun 16, 2024
  • Other » General, General Re: Getting Your Life Together: Day 3- Speech And Dignity

    Hey! I saw your piece looking all lonely in the green room and decided to stop by. And you can bet I'm glad I did! :D The piece has quite ...

    Jun 6, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: CONRAD (excerpt #3)

    Howdy! Just dropping by to give this a quick review. So let's see...First of all Id like to compliment your setting. Your use of descriptive sentences such as when you ...

    Jun 3, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Technology Re: Digital Nerves

    Hey, hey!! Just going through the green room and stumbled upon this piece. And WOW!! What a gem!! The first sentence instantly had me intrigued. I loved your word choice ...

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.

    Whoop, whoop! I have finally arrived. Dearest apologies for being so late!! But here I am! In advance Id like to warn you that I am a very detailed reviewer ...

    Jun 1, 2024


I never travel without my diary. One should always have something sensational to read in the train.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest