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Re: Mad- Chapter 2
Hello, hello! I have come to review this little piece I noticed in the green room. I review as I go. Let's get into it! The tea was made of ...
Sep 7, 2024 -
Re: Bliss Was Ignorance: Chapter 2
There was no way to remove the OpticLens chip from her brain without the risk of permanent damage, so they left it there. Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. WHAT?? Okay before ...
Sep 5, 2024 -
Re: Chapter 8 The travel of self Part 1
Greetings! I have come to review for you. As always, I will be reviewing as I read. Here goes! So the opening line I felt was just a little weak. ...
Sep 4, 2024 -
Re: i never forget things, so everything becomes a memory of you
Hello, herbs. It is time I reviewed for a friend. Here goes! As always, I review as I read. Let's go! So first I had to look over the format ...
Sep 3, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 7
Hello! Tryna keep up with RevMo and stumbled upon this piece. So here comes a review for yah! I will be reviewing as I go like I always do :D ...
Sep 2, 2024 -
Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 1
Greetings! I have come to review this piece. I will be reviewing as I read so this review will be in chronological order. Shall we begin? All right. I love ...
Sep 1, 2024 -
Re: I Like to Think I'm an Author
Oooh I really liked the read! You used some great metaphors such as about being a puppeteer or time traveler. All of those sound like such exciting venues and added ...
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Re: ankyl-atel-form
Now that this piece is out of the green room I feel a slight bit more comfortable reviewing as it is poetry and that is admittedly not my strong point ...
Jun 30, 2024 -
Re: Call of the Depths
Hmmm what a piece I appear to have stumbled upon! Let's get right into it! So the very first thing that really popped out to me is the writing style. ...
Jun 29, 2024 -
Re: Reflecting Hearts - Ch. 10.1 - Kaleidoscope of Dreams and Treachery
Hi, hi! Kaia here to review again :D Let's get right into it! I loosened my grip around him as we slowed to a stop. He cut off the engine, ...
Jun 20, 2024 -
Re: Reflecting Hearts - Ch. 11 - Bon appétit: Serving Truth at Dinner
Hi, hi! Saw a lonely work over here and decided to stop by. Keep in mind this is one of my first chapters I'm reading here so things may not ...
Jun 16, 2024 -
Re: Getting Your Life Together: Day 3- Speech And Dignity
Hey! I saw your piece looking all lonely in the green room and decided to stop by. And you can bet I'm glad I did! :D The piece has quite ...
Jun 6, 2024 -
Re: CONRAD (excerpt #3)
Howdy! Just dropping by to give this a quick review. So let's see...First of all Id like to compliment your setting. Your use of descriptive sentences such as when you ...
Jun 3, 2024 -
Re: Digital Nerves
Hey, hey!! Just going through the green room and stumbled upon this piece. And WOW!! What a gem!! The first sentence instantly had me intrigued. I loved your word choice ...
Jun 2, 2024 -
Re: Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.
Whoop, whoop! I have finally arrived. Dearest apologies for being so late!! But here I am! In advance Id like to warn you that I am a very detailed reviewer ...
Jun 1, 2024
