Kagi

Okay.. I liked, no I really did! It has a few bits I didn't like though. A story is supposed to be a telling/a happening. Like, telling what happened to ...

You've seriously ONLY beguun writing???!! This was just so amazing! FAB-U-LOUS!! I too, normally kind of don't bother reading long stories but yours just.. PULLED ME RIGHT IN! I couldn't ...

I thought it was good but didn't really feel the title of the story fitted the actually story! It should have been Lost or I don't know Dessert.. Aas far ...

Hey People! Don't be so hard on her! I agree it is a bit hard to understand, but I'm sure that Hannah knows what she is trying to get through ...

I haven't read a better story on the whole of the YWS website. I'm new here so I haven't read many but my gosh, this is AMAZZZZINNNGGG!! ;) I agree ...

Hey.. I really enjoyed reading your story. :) I only have one problem. I mean when 'Chauncey' asked her if they wanted to date, in my opinion that's unrealistic. He ...

Heeyy.. I like your Story/Poem it was interesting. One thing,in my opinion it needs a little more depth. Maybe I'm wrong but there is nothing in your story/poem to express ...

So uh about your story, do you want my opinion? Here goes :D I think it should have a lot more detail! Its a romance scene. Make it... goey!! lol ...

Heya :D I love your story. You have really advanced punctuation and grammer, and I can't mention any other mistakes then the ones already made,there really are not that many! ...