Kagi

Mmm great story. The name kirsty has always been a favorite of mine. I love your plot line but not sure where this is oing with both guys involved. The ...

This has the makings of quite a good story. One bit confused me though; When nick pushed her away and told her to go away. Why?! Then later he comes ...

I actually thoroughly enjoyed that. It was absolutly great, I felt really envolved by the IMing. It was a nice tactic used, it helped you feel her distress at whether ...

Great story! I love this-very well written. I loved the last line! It was fantastic and Let me just say instead of Boy this is going to be a hard ...

Great story, a good few grammitical errors but seems to be covered by fellow critques. Your description was excellent and I loved your word choice in some parts. Overall it ...

Hey Kaka here to reveiw.. Well I liked you story. It was descriptive but it didn't really bring me anywhere. I felt exactly as an onlooker. Like I was just ...

Wow, I have to say this is one of my favorite pieces. Its fantastic I've never read something like this and I think I'd have to disagree with sweetmoments; it's ...

Hey its Kakagirl here to review, I must say I found your story really moving. It was quite unique in the fact that I haven't seen many infact any write ...

Absolutly loved your story. It was well written and they stroyline was fantastic. I love cecil. Don't like the name but I love him. I can't wait to read more. ...

Im kaka and I am going to reveiw for you today. :D I felt like I had just been shot. The world shattered around me as I read her lips ...

*Here on request* Well.When I reviewed this one and I thought, "Oh no, another piece thatis going to put my good work to shame." You have a serious talent. I ...

Wow.. This was extremely well written and for calling it sloppy was just unreal. I never read such an intreiguing story since my time here. It kept me reading and ...

Heey.. Here to review.. Corections in red. I was eating a big chocolate ice cream, and feeling the water splashing from the white fountain of one of the most beautiful ...

Hi! Im kaka and I'm goin to review or critque your work today. Your poem was so immense! The title caught my eye and immediatly drew me in. That is ...

This was incredibly heartfelt and I felt every single word in your story. Your words were placed perfectly and well thought out. The structure of your story was delicate and ...