Kafkaescence

Erm, aren't there five in the last line? Or am I counting wrong?

Haha, I did ramble on a bit, didn't I? I really wasn't expecting this to turn out as long as it did, so organization was near the back of my ...

Does it? That's good. I always write garbled first thoughts down in reviews and then only in post-review discussions with the writer do I realize what the heck I was ...

Hey, thanks. I was going for something of a rambling style, just kind of jotting down whatever popped into my mind, so the air of disorganization was, too a point, ...

Also, don't worry. This won't take precedence over my other novel. This is strictly secondary. Labyrinth is still in the works, folks.

Ah, but all sentiment should be real! Fake emotionality will alienate the reader, because it makes it seem like the narrator is telling the reader what to feel, instead of ...

H'oh crap, well, at least you keep me busy. Let's see. I reread it (I didn't notice anything different, so either your edit was exceedingly minute or you haven't put ...

Accidentally posted this when I went to click preview, sorry. :?

Noted.

I want to get back to this. Eventually.

THIS IS TOO SHORT I HATED IT IT'S A WASTE OF SPACE WHY IS THIS SO STUPID AAAAAH

I haven't forgotten about this! I'll be leaving for a few days shortly, but I'll review this more or less the minute I get back, kay?

SmylinG - Huh. To be honest, humor wasn't quite the objective of the second story, but I can easily see what you mean. It was meant to serve as something ...

WUT? You have something new? And it's a contest entry? How did you manage to slip this past me? Expect a review on this. Sometime. -Kafka

This looks interesting. Expect a review from me sometime, if not soon. -Kafka