KaelynPerkins03

Hey persimijakob (aka Jacob)!! I have some feed back for you! So first it seems like you capitalized somethings that didn't need to be capitalized. Next, I would be better ...

Hey Sammy!! I never really got to read your story so I decided to review it! I really liked how you spaced your paragraphs. But my constructive feed back is ...

hey!! great story! I really really enjoyed this story but I have some feedback for you! :) so first I think there were some run on sentences such as "My ...