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KaelynPerkins03

  • Short Story » General, General Re: family travels

    Hey persimijakob (aka Jacob)!! I have some feed back for you! So first it seems like you capitalized somethings that didn't need to be capitalized. Next, I would be better ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Finding A Friend

    Hey Sammy!! I never really got to read your story so I decided to review it! I really liked how you spaced your paragraphs. But my constructive feed back is ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Gracie Wheeler

    hey!! great story! I really really enjoyed this story but I have some feedback for you! :) so first I think there were some run on sentences such as "My ...

    Mar 11, 2016


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien