Kaedee

KD here to review. Erm, this was, er, very interesting. Lol, here are some ways to improve this: -EXXXXXPPPPAANNNNDDD this story. It seems like a skeleton of a story, not ...

Hey Kiki, KD here to review! I'm just going to do a non nitpick review today, if that's okay with you. :wink: Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -This ...

Hey, Sarah! I'm KD, here to review. You seem to be off to a good start here! He sat down at the beautiful black baby grand, cracked his knuckles, took ...

Hiya, KD here to review! Welcome to YWS, by the way. :) Nitpicks: Cross outs, inserted words, added words...corrections in bold. When I was a little girl, I used to ...

Haha, this was great! Good rhythm. Girl:Besides, boy, I'm outta your league! Guy: Oh, girl, just one dance please? Lol, this is going to be stuck in my head for ...

Hey Isha, it's KD! And obviously, I'm here to review. Nitpick Time! I will replace, insert, and cross out words/punctuation in bold. “The one and only. Are you somewhere where ...

Hey, jasmine. KD here to review! Nitpicks: You finish looking at the bland padded around her and look to her face. What? I don't understand. 'The bland padded around her'? ...

Hey, KD here to review. I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, but, er, I'll give this a shot. I think you had a strong start, but I started to ...

Hey burnt_marshmallows, KD here to review! Very...mysterious. Here's one thing that is a bit odd: then the sun could close its eye and rest Maybe the moon would shine brighter ...

Hey crescent, KD here to review. I clenched it too tight, causing the thorns to cut into my hand. To make it more dramatic, I would say: 'I clenched it ...

KD here to review chapter six! I'll start straight off with the nitpicks. Nitpicks: His back ached horribly, but other than that he was alive and breathing. I think that ...

Awesome! :D I knew this was going to be featured as soon as I saw this. They lyrics are hilarious, and they all fit perfectly with the song. Where do ...

Hey Esther! I read the last chapter and this one. They were both great. Had either one known what would happen at dinner, the two might have just retreated to ...

Hey helover, I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today! Ooh, good idea. Here are your main problems: You state too obvious things. Also, there are better, more touching ways ...

Hey Shadow, loved this! Welcome to YWS by the way, and I'm Kaedee. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I loved how you introduced your story. -Great ending! -I ...