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KD is here to review! Nitpicks: She plucked it from his hand s gingerly, slowly, and with great care not to disrupt the life in his hands. He smiled chivalrously. ...

Hiya Jorge, KD here again! In this piece, I think you earn a gold medal for creativity, lol, because of this sentence! the earth commited committed suicide when he stepped ...

Hiya DreamWriter, KD here to review! I closed my eyes. This was it. I reached my goal. I made it to the track finals and I was going to win. ...

Hm. This sounds decent, but what I think will make this story really interesting, is the world it takes place in, and the wolf characters, since the plot isn't exactly ...

Hi, Words! I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today. Wee woo wee woo wee woo P.J . ran around the living room making firetruck noises, drowning out the sound ...

Hey jolene, what's up? :) I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today! Not bad. Here's a nitpick critique for you: Watch your tenses! You switched from past to present ...

Hey Wing, KD here to review! Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -Good beginning. - “Why are you so stupid?” Unable to resist the urge, I take a glance ...

Hi, I'm KD, an' I'll be your reviewer today! Welcome to the site. I loved this. Wow, so true! This was cute, simple, and very well thought out. Don't have ...

Hey, KD here. Erm, I don't understand! This is confusing. Is this: My name is Cait McGowan. I don't really understand why I'm doing this yet. Anger can make my ...

Hey, KD here to review, seeing you had none. :( Nitpicks: “I swear that if it was not true I will give up my throne,” he said. This sentence is ...

Hey Chal, KD here again. Grr. This laptop is horrible. It's messing up all my reviews. Well, anyways... Nitpicks: He was about to bite into his fine piece of toast ...

Nice to meet you! The name's KD. Welcome to the site. I'll review your first chapter paragraph by paragraph, if that's alright with you. My body was getting heavier with ...

Hey, KD here, I'm just going to critique this chapter since it's your latest and since it has no reviews! Nitpicks: “That worthless piece ’o crap excuse of a dad ...

Hey Jane, KD here to do you-know-what. :) Okay, this was cute. I loved how they met again in the same way they met when they were six. Great idea! ...

Hey Chal, welcome to YWS. I'm KD, an' I'll be your reviewer today! I'll review this story piece by piece. There once was a cat that was so fat with ...