KaatiieBugg

Hey, this was pretty good! mateeah, the part of a car you sit in is considered a cabin, I beleive, at least with pick-up trucks it is... Keep it up!

This was a good poem, short and to the point, I guess.. I liked how you compared it to music. good job! -Buggs

Wonderful job! *claps* Other than what Paw already mentioned, nothing really caught my eye as being a typo or something. I liked the flashback, and how you used that. Great ...

Thanks, I agree now looking back on this poem that the "By the time I" stnazas are pretty much unneeded.... is this better? First it was an inkling; a spark; ...

Great poem, my thoughts exactly. I loved the last little bit: Can’t create; Inspiration is gone. because sometimes there isn't any inspiration.

I agree. I love haikus, they're my absolute favorite (well, besides freeform) but this one is kind of hard to make sense of. Keep trying!