Can’t write;
The words never come.
Can’t speak;
Nothing comes to mind.
Can’t think;
There’s nothing new.
Can’t create;
Inspiration is gone.
Where did it go?
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Great poem, my thoughts exactly. I loved the last little bit:
because sometimes there isn't any inspiration.
I like it and it flows quite nice. I like the shortness and it is creative. However, the line
seems a bit too long syllable rise and I would shorten it by 1 or 2. Otherwise, it is great.
Hmm. Well, it's very short and sweet..... But to the point?
I suppose a poem never really gets 'to the point', though....
Other than that... it was quite good.
~Lily~