Justlittleoleme2

Thank you so much for the review FlamingPhoenix! I am also a big fan of Dragon stories! ^-^ About the lack of description, I can see what you mean. I ...

I hope you are right on not needing this prologue. I'm not a fan of exposition, but I did like the way I wrote this. For me, from my perspective, ...

Thank you for the review!

Thank you for the review! And thanks for understanding the heart and meaning behind it. ^-^

Thank you for the review!!! ^-^

Thanks for the awesome review. :D Sorry about the whiplash!

Good question. Dear old uncle is biding his time. Like a true predator, he's not going to waste his energy. He knows that she has to come down sometime, and ...

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Thanks so much for the review. I really appreciate It! :D I have a good explanation for his reappearance, but you`'ll have to wait for the next chapter.

Ha! Yep, not hallucinating is always a good thing. Sorry for the confusion. :D

Yes, you said it was too short, so I made it longer. :)

Thank you so much for your review. I always appreciate an honest critique. As you can see, I've made quite a bit of edits. It isn't perfect of course, it ...

Let's see... During the first five lines of the poem you show us the deep damp dark forest, bright orange hunting vests, the proud bold anxious men. But on line ...

Let's see... During the first five lines of the poem you show us the deep damp dark forest, bright orange hunting vests, the proud bold anxious men. But on line ...

I tried cleaning up the dialogue a bit! Just the part with the ranting drunk, hopefully he is a little easier to understand now. ^-^