Justlittleoleme

Well, I understood this story just enough to enjoy it...I did get lost quite a few times as the grammer is a little...Um...crazy? If I'm reading this right I think ...

Wow...this poem was epic...well, maybe not epic but it certainly left an impression on me. I liked it, to put things simply. This line was my particular favorite: The stork's ...

Okay, I just have to say, I really like this poem. It was very fun to read and made me smile, especially that last part! I also liked the title, ...

It was beautifully written! Why is it that 3 in the morning writing(or drawing) is always the best...the few nitpicks have already been pointed out so I will just give ...

This was a pretty decent story for you first entry ;) . There were some parts that I really liked(like the riddles and such :3 ) and I can tell ...

I really liked this poem! It was actually very deep and well structured, without even having to be a whole page long. I also felt the message was a very ...

I really like the imagery of this piece, especially the part about running your finger's through a river of indigo, etc. I found it very enjoyable to read...though I did ...

First, I have to say I really did like this a lot! I felt like I was reading a book...well at least after I got into it. Sure there were ...

Everyone else has already pointed out the few grammatical issues and so on so I guess I'm free to simply say I loved it. I found this poem to be ...

I loved this poem! The imagery was as powerful as one could hope and the story of the shackled kind was moving. I could almost see the cage of bones, ...

I actually liked this piece a lot. Everyone else seems to have pointed out the errors and rough spots so I don't have anything to say there. Overall it was ...

I enjoyed the beginning of the story. I was able to connect with it and I got a pretty good idea of where your character was from. I do feel ...

I really enjoyed reading this! It was original to say the least and made some very good feels a little clumsy when reading it though. I would say it needs ...