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Well, sorry to be such a downer, but... This wasn't really good in my eyes. The writing style was kind of boring... It also didn't help me with being more ...

I laughed the whole time I was reading this. I can't even stop now... Oh gosh, running out of air. Keep writing!! Alzora

This is a great poem!! I do think it needs more emotion though. The repetitiveness actually gives it personality, it's very nice :) Keep writing, Alzora

Great poem! I see nothing wrong with it... Good job, it's got great emotion! Keep writing, Alzora

Great poem!! I don't see any improvement that it needs, yay! Keep writing, Alzora

Thanks Sar-Sar.

Interesting poem. I believe, though, towards the middle it stops flowing smoothly. Keep writing, Alzora

I think it was very dramatic in the middle and less dramatic at each end. Good job though, this poem is wonderful :) Keep writing! Alzora

Awesome poem!! I love it. It almost reminds me of a book series that I love. You did really well!! Keep writing! Alzora

I love this line: But I miss you. It's definitely my favorite. This poem is very good. I like it a lot. Your very good at writing poems!! Keep writing! ...

Oh. Ok. Thanks for explaining!! Keep writing, Alzora

OMG!! This is creepy but cool at the same time... Nice, I likey :) Keep writing, Alzora

This is a wonderful poem!! I have no nit-picks and don't see anything wrong with it!! Good job! Keep writing, Alzora

Wow. Depressing poem... I like it :D. I my self write many a depressing poem. Welcome to the depressing poet world... Keep writing, Alzora

This. Poem. Is. Wonderful. Really. WONDERFUL!!! So... Yeah. I love it. Keep writing!!! Alzora