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JustMeValery

JustMeValery

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Silenced (Prologue)

    Hello there! I'm just here to give you a review, so I'm sorry if I'm too bitchy or something. Hope it helps, though ;) Okay, let's start! "The snow fell ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Strawberry Hearts -3-

    Hello there! Wow! What writing! I really like the way how personal you're making this. It's very - how should I put this? - emotional. Keep writing, I think it's ...

    Sep 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 27

    Hello there! I'm just giving you a review, hope I'm not being to bitchy or something ;) Now, the story's good. It's not going too fast or too slow, so ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Covenant (Prologue)

    Hello there! I really like your writing! The dialogues are easy to follow and interesting. But I felt like doing a review about it, so here you go. Hope I'm ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Miss Green's Home for special children

    Hello there! An interesting story you've got here. I'm just going to say my opinion here, hope it can help you :). First, I really like the intro (the prophecy). ...

    Aug 31, 2014


In the past I would definitely say who you would find inside. Not so much today. Place is bonkers …. As is everywhere
— Greg Specter