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yeah I know my grammar is really bad I will try to fix it :). the reason she is allowed to go to the planetarium by herself will be revealed ...

Hi I will take your suggestions into account but the story is from Astrid's point of view. She uses slang and improper grammar becuse she is just a kid and ...

Hi sorry I liked this but there is this one thing was bothering me. "not until you get home is it you realize you have left you dignity." you is ...

Thanks! I know I do need to have something happen the next chapter will be out soon and something will happen! thanks for reviewing!

Thank you! sorry I struggle a little with sentence structure and grammar I will take your suggestions thank you!

Thank you for reviewing! I do have a lot of trouble with grammar and I am working on it I will try to follow you advice. Thank you again!

I know it's a bad poem I had no ideas of what to do and I just kind of wrote rhyming words down. I did know that nothing really happened ...

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Thank you for the review . I did 2 obsesses not 3 because when I did 3 it messed with the flow a little bit. I will work on the ...