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JustALittleBarry

JustALittleBarry

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Goodnight, Sister

    Oh phew, super glad it's not a true story. That would be indescribably horrid and sad. Of course! It was a beautiful, emotional poem. Well thought out.

    Apr 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Goodnight, Sister

    Super awesome poem, though it was extremely sad, I had wanted o cry at end. Please tell me this is not a personal poem, and if it is, I am ...

    Apr 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Iridescent Thoughts

    Thank you very much!!

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Iridescent Thoughts

    Thanks

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Lotus Eaters

    Thank you for the review! I found it very helpful!

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Lotus Eaters

    Thank you!

    Mar 13, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please Remember Me (Chapters 11-15)

    Super awesome

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please Remember Me (Chapters 11-15)

    Plot twist!!

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please Remember Me (Chapters 1-5)

    Love it! I'm going to finish reading all of the chapters, then I'll write a review!!

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: If This is Thoughts at Night...

    Thank you! (I apologize for the late reply) I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and my username! XD Also, thank you for all of the suggestions! Thank you again! Kitty ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: If This is Thoughts at Night...

    Hello! Sorry for not replying sooner. Thank you for the review! I do understand that the title is grammatically incorrect, however I did that intentionally to fit the pattern of ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: #94

    Beautiful and magnificent poem!

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: The Water

    Thank you for the review! Yeah the rhyme scheme is pretty confusing. I think that I'll just get rid of the rhyming later, as it didn't necessarily turn out the ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: The Water

    Thanks for the review! I uderstood what you were saying about Jesus, but I actually never thought about it that way XD I'm not very religious, but I could tell ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: If This is Thoughts at Night...

    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    Mar 4, 2017


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites