Jurelixranoanad

Thank you for the feedback! I really suck at Grammar in general so its nice to have that review so i can fix my mistakes. I plan to edit this ...

Great emotional impact in the first few paragraphs with Felix dealing with his grief and the new demands as a king to be, however you were a bit repeditive in ...

Hi J her for a reveiw. First things first I'm loving the story. Nice plot, interesting characters, and a fantasy video game world this has all the right elements to ...

Hi, J here for a review, I have been reading and writing poetry since I was very young and I can say that this type of poem about losing someone ...

I am the work speller and my laptop won't correct it for me I will definitely fix that. Thanks for catching that. %uD83D%uDE42

I love your decriptions but I needed more of the senses to be explained. I could feel the emotion. Next time you write a poem though break up the lines ...

Thanks for that review. I was so scared that my first review on this site was going to be terrible. I really do hate stereotypical writing so when my friend ...

I love this story the way you start out as though she was completely innocent then she turns into this deceptive murder covering up her tracks. Great job on this ...