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Re: questions
Sure you can! Feel free to edit this post for that, as this counts as a new literary thread.
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: The Old Man
Hey Again, Joshua, :) My punctuation corrections will be in bold. ---- This chink, my daughters fiancé , was on his way for dinner and to spend the night. Kate ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Kylan, (I'm so rusty at reviewing; please bear with me.) Hart I can't review this one. I've tried a few times, but the words for this just don't come. It's ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: Halfbreed Chapter One
Also, not to sound rude, why would I have then sound human when they're clearly not? I was using the very proper dialogue to show the difference in species. Fair ...
Aug 16, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Kylaaaaan! Okay, I officially suck at reviewing. Wasn't it last week when I promised you a review on this? At any rate, it's my 850th (which means I ruin the ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Another poem!
*Locked* This is from last year guys. I encourage all of you to check the dates of the original post before bumping up a thread, unless you've been asked to ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Hey Kylan! I cooked up a decent review, and Mozilla thought it would be a good idea to discard it, so, I took a break and reviewed your other piece... ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: my monologue
Moved to Other. ;)
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Hi Kylan! You only told me that Yellow has been updated once! You didn't tell me about seasickness. :P (And when I was scrolling, I somehow accidentally locked the thread... ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: recognize
*moved to other*
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: drunk driver's persepective.
*Moved to Other*
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Kylan-- sanddollar Chevy spoke on the lack of feeling in this poem, and I somewhat agree with her. I think that it lacks a dominant image of emotion, like how ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The other side
Moved to other Fiction. ;)
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: My novel.
*Moved to other fiction*
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: [deleted]
Locked. Plagiarism.
Jul 5, 2009