Juniper

Hey again Dude! June here =) This chapter was good! Very few (if any) flaws in this! You seem to have italicized all of your staging (great job! Some of ...

Hey there Dude! June here again! This will probably be a short, near worthless review. Okay! This part was a lot easier to read than the first two now that ...

Hey there! I figured I should raid your portfolio for something to review, and I chose this because it's recent and unreviewed, so here we go. Ahem! You know I ...

Hey there Dude! June here! *Gasps* No reviews? Tsh, tsh, tsk. That must change. Okay! So first, not only did your settings and characters change, but the language style changes, ...

Hey dude! June here again! *claps* The one thing I love about reading stories on YWS that are somewhat old is I don't have to wait for the next part. ...

Hey there, Dude! June here, as promised ^_^. Since I have a lot to read up on, I shall keep my reviews short and brief as possible, but I hope ...

Hey Jon! June here! Bravo! Another poem =D. Let's get to work! First stanza: I like the opening, "All of the emotions," it really opens the setting well and introduces ...

Hey there Evan! June here! [and I am totally a "grammar/punctuation" Nazi :lol:] This is absolutely hilarious! I love it :D. It's the type of poem that deserves lots and ...

Hey there Abby! Welcome to YWS, I'm June and I'm going to be your reviewer today :). We have a 2:1 policy here, which means that for every one piece ...

Hey there Jasmine! It's June, and I'm going to review this for you today! Let's get to work! Okay! Have you ever read the poem, "The Highwayman", by Alfred Noyes? ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm June-- very nice to meet you. I'm going to review this for you. Quite a random, emotional poem, I say. It's short-- which is ...

Hey Rosey! June here, and I'm going to review this. It's a beautiful piece, but I think some things drag a bit here, so, I'm going to whip out my ...

Hey Jon! June here! I have finally gotten around to this. Gee, I am proud of myself :lol:. Let's begin! I'll hope I'm not too harsh. I like the concept ...

Hey there Jon! June here, and I'm going to review this for you. Firstly, forgive me for taking years to get to this. Terribly sorry, I had deadlines to meet ...

Hey there Kylan! June here, and I'm going to review this for you. This was great. I'm not just saying that to boost your ego xD or because your poems ...