Juniper

Hi there Heffa! Welcome to the wonderful lands of YWS! I'm June and I'm going to run over this for you quickly :). This is quite an interesting prologue. It's ...

Hi there! I'm June! I don't know if I've reviewed you before, but here we go: I was snapped out of my reverie by a [s] tap tap tap[/s] 1 ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm June! This was such a sweet, sad poem. I really like the emotion you're putting in this with words. One thing!: with onlya sliver ...

Hey there Flem! June here! Lately, I really like your poetry. The more I read it, the more I appreciate it. Contrary to what everyone else has said, I really ...

Hey there Dreamer! June here! I'm not sure if I've ever critiqued anything by you before aside from photography. Either way, I owe you a review :D. This was such ...

Hey there Yoha! June here again! I really liked this piece! It has a gentle elegance to it, and flowed smoothly. I like the imagery that dances in this poem-- ...

Hello Evi! June here! I hope we've spoken before? Because it feels like we have, and it feels like I owed you reviews? Either way, I haven't reviewed this, so ...

Bonjour, Sir! June here! Strange how I read this poem before and never noticed it was by you. I should have known... The repetition in this poem is perfect. It ...

Hello Eraqio! I'm June, and I'm to be your critic for the moment. Poems like this, that are based upon something concrete and do not pose the subject too vaguely ...

Dearest Hannah, You have satisfied your audience. Not just satisfied them, you disappointedly satisfied them. We were urging for more conflict-- you gave it, and we wanted them to become ...

Hi again, Hannah! June here :D Because this is so flawlessly written, I am going to be as nitpick-y as possible! Bzzzt. Bzzzt. Bzzzt. The purple cell phone vibrating on ...

Hello Hannah! June here again, to run over this quickly :D. Once again, this chapter, like the first, is nearly flawless. To me, writing is often rhythmic, but sometimes the ...

Hey there Hannah! June here! I am totally unreasonably late with this! I feel terribly guilty! Clo-dear has already touched on any possible errors that might have existed. The only ...

Hey there Kylan, June here! I believe I have mentioned before that I don't like reviewing your work because of how well written it is? (Yes, I know, that sounds ...

Hi Jon! June here! Your work is always impressive. Your style is clearly defined, and I'm sure that if I saw something by you that was unsigned, I would be ...