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Re: Maybe Skies Are Blue
Hey Holly! It's June, I think I already expressed to you how much I love this poem. I really, really do-- it's so beautiful, and so touching, and overall just... ...
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Re: The Test
Tae Kwon Do! Nice! Cliiimber! It's June! ^_^ So! I like this a lot; firstly, because it's martial arts, and martial arts are just fabulous to read about, and secondly, ...
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Re: The Price Too High.
Hi! June here :) So! It took me a little while to find something of yours with less than five replies, so, sorry this is delayed :). Anyway! Because I ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: To Elma (2)
Yay! Yay! Chapter two! Yay! --- She ignored me in school, and all the other girls ignored her. By the sixth grade, she had cut all her wispy hair off ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: To Elma (1)
Hi there, Clo! June here =D. *promises not to be harsh* I have more written, but not posting it for now... not sure if it's good enough. First off, this ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: The Others
Hi there, Jon! June here! So, Galerius has already given this a shred, not actually leaving much else to be touched on, but anyway, here I go: The bells rang ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Aela and The Leshy Part One
Beckiw! Beckiw! It's June :). I don't think I've reviewed anything of yours aside from photography, have I? I'm not sure, anyway, here we go: The wind whipped through the ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Bailey, one.
Hiya Loose! It's June! Hmph. I'm not sure if it's because I've been accustomed to greeting now, or my lack of sleep, or if your writing is just flawless-- I ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: beverly hills murder chapter 1
Hi there lil mizz kitty! I'm June, your critic for the moment, and I'm going to run through this, okay? :) Erin closed her locker and went to the lunch ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Sea
Hi there Lil_Pau! I'm June, and I'm going to review this :D. This is a pretty poem! I love how you described all of the faces of the sea, in ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Knowledge
Oh, hi there, imapoemperson! I'm June, and I am your critic for the moment! This was interesting, to say the least. Very intelligent, well thought out. Let's jump quickly to ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: String Cheese
Shina, Shina, on the wall, tell me who is the silliest of all? You're somewhat ridiculous, you know? This is absolutely silly. Remember to keep a consistent structure, dear. Try, ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: wine
Hey Chevy! June here :) I'm rather delicate about reviewing fragile poems like this; I hate to ruin them-- especially when they aren't following any particular form or structure. Anyway! ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: memoirs of Omega
Hi there Monument! It's June :) Yay! Another great poem by you that's left me speechless. Your play on words is absolutely amazing, Monument. There isn't anything I would change ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The Writer's Inspiration
Hi there Dallas! Nice to meet you! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you, dear. Let's take it bit by little bit. Sitting here at my ...
Mar 4, 2009
