Juniper

Hey Splooshie! June here! :D I'm loving this story thus far. Really. Let's see: He shot me a confused look for a moment , as if something was wrong. “You ...

Hey again, Splooshie! June here! First off, I'm going to disagree with Velvet on saying that this is cliche. I think that this has potential to be cliche, but that's ...

Hey Splooshie! June here! This is a great prologue and all, but I have to say, your first chapter was hooking enough to hold my interest. :P Anyway! I'm going ...

Few things! :P This poem is on my bedroom wall. My mom loves this, for some odd reason. It actually got super hot here after you wrote this. xD Not ...

Hey Ermixon, June here. Sorry it took me long to get to this, I just haven't had the time/motivation to review anything, so here goes. I usually don't do nitpicks, ...

Hey Jared, June here, and I'm going to review this. Before I begin (I should warn you that I am a somewhat biased person, so you can neglect something I ...

Hey Quill! Welcome to YWS! June here! So, hopefully I'll be the first to review this, but who knows. :P I'm racing Mars in this review, so, yeah, fun! Let's ...

Hey Dono, Hey Tiff! Juniper here to skim over this for you. Now, some of my comments can be disregarded as unnecessary, but I just want to point out a ...

*Instructor walks in* Psh, greeters. I'll review this first, mwahaha! When it smells just like rain, on the stranger's perfect face, my heart brakes at that sight, my mind's silence ...

Eric! Clo-roupe has done a wonderful review on this, so, just pay attention to the important stuff she said, and you've pretty much got this covered. :) I truly like ...

So, Eric! June here! I'm just going to come in and repeat what everyone else said, kay? It was written in a strangely unique way and was ultimately refreshing. Done. ...

Hi Jon! Juniper here! :) One of the first things that I noticed about this poem is how forced it seems. It's not flowing as smoothly as many of your ...

Hey Eric! Juniper here again! :) So, this was pretty cool. :) Let's pick on stuff that needs to be corrected, and then we'll move on to my babbling. =P ...

Hey Eric! Juniper here (or by your terms adviser or whatever). A quick note: You need to organize your portfolio to make it easy for your "Adviser" to find your ...

Coon! June here! I love your fiction. It's always wonderfully clear, and always, always enjoyable to read. Since this is for a contest, I'm going to go nitpicky on you ...