Juniper

Ergo Sum Novus, I found this poem enjoyable in its simplicity. For it being placed in Lyric Poetry, I felt that a bit of the narrative could be trimmed out ...

Samasaurus, I loved this. It's not often that I come across a piece of poetry, especially guided ones, and find that I can enjoy it. You wrote this excellently, and ...

Hey there, Ollie! [Bear with me, it's terribly late and I'm deprived of sleep :P] This is start with potential! To begin, you see the artistic foot you started us ...

Hey there; June here, Do pay attention to what Sunny was kind enough to point out -- punctuation plays a rather important role in poetry, especially in poems such as ...

Lily, Not bad -- I do tend to enjoy poetry more when it has trifold meanings to it, but nonetheless, this is fair. Good use of onomatopoeia, though I'm not ...

Hey Jynx, This is a pretty fair beginning. I like the fact that you have a consistent rhyme scheme that you were able to maintain until the end. I often ...

Hey there! As Classy and Juliet pretty much both said without actually saying it, there's not much meat or fat to eat off of here. To me, this sounded more ...

Hi Tiger! This wasn't bad -- you have a consistent rhyme scheme and it's good to see that you maintained it throughout the poem. I'm not too sure that I ...

Elizabeth, Perhaps it's not a bad effort put into this, but I feel that you need to utilize your space in words better than this. Try to avoid narrating emotions ...

Poet -- I can't see much value in the ways of meaning to this; I can't tell if the poetic focus of this is in rhythm; my pronunciation in French ...

Hey there, To begin, I'm not sure if the title of this should be the Beginning of my book, because Bigging is technically not a word, but if it was, ...

Nicely done, Splooshie, It made me very small, like a child again. Should this be, "It made me feel" or should it stay this way? Impressively done as always -- ...

Kylan, It is late, and I don't have much time [or brain] for an indepth review for this. I'm familiar with this painting of Monet's, and I felt, in reading ...

Sare -- I can't remember the last time I reviewed you! Good to see you writing again. I have two major complaints with this poem. [one] Narrative. Let it be ...

Sureeeal, Same characters as your last story, eh? I'm glad to see that -- they were interesting enough, and to see more is good. Little thingamajig: ‘Yes, Rachael. You know ...