Juniper

Hey there! Have you solved the formatting problem already? It appears well formatted to me, but I'm not sure if it's to your liking. I really like this poem -- ...

Hey there, Poems are funny things. :P Usually if I don't like the rhyme/structure of it, then it'd make sense to like what it's about, but usually if I don't ...

Hey there, I can't say that this stood much ground in the ways of poetry; I'm sorry for your loss-- if this was a personal reflection, and writing is a ...

Hey Tariq, Seemingly not a bad effort put in here. I'm not too clear what you're getting at though; your introduction briefed us on things that ruin highschool and the ...

Miral -- There's something intriguing about the way you write, although I can't say what it is. I like the rush that your words carry on with when you start ...

Hey Laura, Lacking originality? Haha, it may lack a few things, silly, but originality might have found a spot here-- it's not every day that you find the random poems ...

Errrric, Seriously. You go too long without sharing much of your writing. Good to see you still have your flair. Little things here need to be addressed, which I will ...

Gasp! No one has reviewed this yet? Hey Anna; June here. :) I like the images and play on words that you have here. Creativity speaks in this, but as ...

Miral, I like this -- the beginning was off to a weak footing, but as we progressed beyond the second line, the pull increased where you spun us off into ...

Caaaaaanada, Smorg pretty much struck the nail on the head. I agree -- I feel that this could be developed into more. The close repetition in the beginning kind of ...

Hey Manda, Memorial poems are sweet. The rhyme here is good in consistency, but I would recommend not relying too heavily on it, because it dominates the poem and overrides ...

Hello there! Ego said it; in this poem, you risk turning your poem into a cliche by using cliches. It's not a crime to use cliches, but the only harm ...

Makar, This wasn't bad. As I read through this (bearing in mind that I read this a few times and let it sit before I chose to critique it), I ...

Hello there! :) Interesting rhyme scheme you have here. I can't tell if the usage of slants and imperfects was intended here, dear, but read this over -- the scheme ...

Hey there, As Ego mentioned, the idea behind this isn't particularly original, and in it being such a common theme, it gets a bit boring. The suicidal love theme of ...