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Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010
Kylan, Kylan, how long has it been since I've told you what I think of your works? I adore them, simply put. On période rose et bleu (or, deserts) of ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Snowflakes from Erebus
Hi, Galerius, me here, When you first asked me to take a look at this, (which was recent enough that you should be able to recall it ;)) I remember ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: *Amar* *Vivo* *Crea* *Fe*
Hey fire :) Love's life creates faith ? So, I think this poem is cute in its meaning, and the fact that you threw the Spanish acronym in there creates ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: We are Poets
Hi, July Ruby! Given the nature of this poem, I think you have a lot of room to reach beyond what you've covered here, and expand this idea, because, in ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: The Last Words
Hi, Hibiscus, have we met? I'm June. :) Creative work here. I think that you did a nice job with this poem, but a major issue I'm having with it ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold
Hi, Sierra, I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. :) I have to say, it's a catchy song you've based this off of. Let's get to work: ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: The colour purple
Hey, Retro Disco, June here, I enjoyed this poem; it's simply put, it's concise, and it's complete, meaning that it doesn't leave us hanging at the end. I enjoyed your ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: I once knew a girl
Hey there, Uo, June here, I don't really feel as if you delivered the story to us in the best manner you could have. I feel like it's a series ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Revenant
Well, hello there, and look, a critique in the same day I promise it. I think I'm getting better. In passing, I've discussed some aspect or another of this poem ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Let There Be Blight
Gal, I've postponed finish this far too long, and haven't quite said as much on it as I would've what with brain being not working and stuff, but here we ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Rain
Hey there, I feel that this poem has potential, but I'm not quite certain that you've reached it. The concept of rain masking tears is cliche in an emo-istic sense, ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Insomniac
Hey there, Nicely done! I enjoyed the short length of the lines, the easy read to this, and the fact that you kept it light until the end. I'm going ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Night Sky
Hi Coter, I'm June, your reviewer for the momento -- I found that this was centered around the sensory details, dear, on things like feelings and scent and sight. I ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: A Life I Didn't Need
Hey there, duckling, This is a poem that left me wondering, and I'm not sure if I want to highlight on that as a positive or a negative, but frankly ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Boring Phone-Calls
Jasmine, I always look to your poetry as a source of inspiration. There's something unique to you about them that never les me down, as it's always fresh and unpredictable ...
Jun 27, 2010
