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Juniper

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Legend's Hollow

    This is for CastleInTheSky's contest. I use picture 8 of the little girl, but I changed the age I hope that's okay. (Hey there Peanut! June here! Forgive me if ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: He Wasn't Too Old For Her

    Hey there, June here! That was a very good read. I absolutely loved it. It was perfectly written and brilliant. The only nitpick I have is when you put the ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Empire

    (Hey there Evan! June here! I'm going to review your poem for you now :).) All you people sitting up high, wondering what poor person to make cry. Very good ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The path

    Hey there Darko! June here, and I shall review this for you today. So, this is called "path of casts", but as we read through the poem, it almost tells ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Letters to the earth

    (Hey there Expiring, I'm June and I'm going to review this for you :)) Submit me your voices, your legend, Where the God of ancient pillars, Crumbling red stone from ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Liana Unbroken

    (Hey there Kaylyn! June here! I'm going to review this for you :). I hope I'm not too harsh on you :). ) Raiyne sprinted through the city. Whitewasher towers ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Scribe

    (Hey there! June here, and I'm going to be reviewing this for you. Pardon my rusty skills, and I hope I'm not too harsh.) Calon awoke to the sudden feeling ...

    Dec 25, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Tipping The Velvet {four}

    Hey Sarah! Brilliant. I loved this chapter. I don't care that it's headed in the direction of romance-- you promise to make the story otherwise, so I believe you will. ...

    Dec 25, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Poison Love - chapter 1

    () Chapter One I stood outside the rotten, iron gate looking into the old, abandoned manor. It had been at least a decade since I had last been to this ...

    Dec 25, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hey Babycakes

    Hey there Kaila! Seeing that I'm rather late with my review, and everyone else has covered the most important parts of this, I shall just tell you what I think ...

    Dec 25, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Tipping The Velvet {three}

    I've edited the last chapter; and Anne has declined the offer of money, instead of accepting it. Hola Sarah! I'm here to review your next part! Chapter 3 When they ...

    Dec 25, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Tipping The Velvet {two}

    This is a novel I have just started, set in the Victorian Times. It was previously set in 1920 but it was far too hard for me to write as ...

    Dec 25, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Me

    (Hey there Evanrith! I'm June and I'm going to review your poem =) ) (Okay, to be honest, when I clicked this poem, I thought it would be something a ...

    Dec 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do Not Stand By My Grave And Weep

    Hey Raimunda! I don't know how to say this without sounding rude-- forgive me if I do, but it seems like I've read this before. It's pretty common to see ...

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: 2010

    Very nice Jigs! I liked it a lot. It was very... uh... horrific to say the least xD. It was far from my type of story, BUT, I liked it ...

    Dec 23, 2008


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