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Re: Legend's Hollow
This is for CastleInTheSky's contest. I use picture 8 of the little girl, but I changed the age I hope that's okay. (Hey there Peanut! June here! Forgive me if ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: He Wasn't Too Old For Her
Hey there, June here! That was a very good read. I absolutely loved it. It was perfectly written and brilliant. The only nitpick I have is when you put the ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Empire
(Hey there Evan! June here! I'm going to review your poem for you now :).) All you people sitting up high, wondering what poor person to make cry. Very good ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: The path
Hey there Darko! June here, and I shall review this for you today. So, this is called "path of casts", but as we read through the poem, it almost tells ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Letters to the earth
(Hey there Expiring, I'm June and I'm going to review this for you :)) Submit me your voices, your legend, Where the God of ancient pillars, Crumbling red stone from ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Liana Unbroken
(Hey there Kaylyn! June here! I'm going to review this for you :). I hope I'm not too harsh on you :). ) Raiyne sprinted through the city. Whitewasher towers ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: The Scribe
(Hey there! June here, and I'm going to be reviewing this for you. Pardon my rusty skills, and I hope I'm not too harsh.) Calon awoke to the sudden feeling ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {four}
Hey Sarah! Brilliant. I loved this chapter. I don't care that it's headed in the direction of romance-- you promise to make the story otherwise, so I believe you will. ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love - chapter 1
() Chapter One I stood outside the rotten, iron gate looking into the old, abandoned manor. It had been at least a decade since I had last been to this ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Hey Babycakes
Hey there Kaila! Seeing that I'm rather late with my review, and everyone else has covered the most important parts of this, I shall just tell you what I think ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {three}
I've edited the last chapter; and Anne has declined the offer of money, instead of accepting it. Hola Sarah! I'm here to review your next part! Chapter 3 When they ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {two}
This is a novel I have just started, set in the Victorian Times. It was previously set in 1920 but it was far too hard for me to write as ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Me
(Hey there Evanrith! I'm June and I'm going to review your poem =) ) (Okay, to be honest, when I clicked this poem, I thought it would be something a ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: Do Not Stand By My Grave And Weep
Hey Raimunda! I don't know how to say this without sounding rude-- forgive me if I do, but it seems like I've read this before. It's pretty common to see ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: 2010
Very nice Jigs! I liked it a lot. It was very... uh... horrific to say the least xD. It was far from my type of story, BUT, I liked it ...
Dec 23, 2008
