Junel

At least you only made them at the end and not through the entire thing

Thanks for the review.

I'm just glad that I can help. :p

Hey, this is great! I can't wait to read the first chapter. Good Luck and Keep Writing Sláinte -Junel

Hey,thanks for the review. First off you are right that it hurts to punch someone in the face, but as for how she can do all this well you'll have ...

Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you are enjoying reading this because I love writing it. Your nit-pick is solved in the next chapter.

Hey, thanks for the review and thanks especially for listing the places I had errors I also miss a few even after reading the same chapter time after time.

I'm always happy to help

Hey, this is really nice. Grammatical Etc. errors: The blood covered ground. So you use this sentence twice in one paragraph which is fine, but maybe try to use something ...

Thanks for the review. I'll try getting the next chapter out in the next 24 hours or so.

Thanks for the review.

Also I'm glad you like my name choices. You've probably never heard the name Canara used before because I made the name up by placing random letters together and mixing ...

Thanks for the review. You are correct about her reaction. She is just confused and a little mad at this point.

Thanks for the review. When I wrote this the first time I had a half broken shape bar so I had to go through and add tons, but I guessed ...

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the little humour in this chapter.