Junel

I approve.

Also, just a small note: Technically colour is not wrong. It's just the non-American spelling. Although my story could be set in America my character 'thinks' more within non-american terms ...

Thanks for the review!

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the review its really helpful! As for your comment on including more emotions, the lack is kind of an intentional thing because of my character's personality, but I ...

Thanks for the review! I always miss a few funky sounding sentences when I 'attempt' to edit so thanks for pointing them out here. Although the first couple things you ...

Thanks again, the whole emotionless thing is given a lot more backing in the first chapter but I do see how it might be getting annoying. As for the end ...

Thanks this review was super helpful! Definitely a lot of stuff would habe made sense of you read previous chapters (ex. The dog thing). Overall I suck at descriptions so ...

Thanks for the review! It%u2019s definitely a weird dystopia, with a lot of bad things all happening at once because what goverment there is doesn%u2019t care. Also thanks for the ...

Thanks!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! This is definitely not a contemporary high school and although I'm assuming you caught onto that by a later point its also clear in other chapters. ...

Thanks for the review! I'd love for you to read the other parts and I hope you enjoy it!

Hey, thanks for the awesome review. This is a bit of an introductory chapter to her life and I thought I'd kinda leave it plain like that because a lot ...

Thanks for the review!