Junebug

Wow, this is great. I feel like it really captures the weight of losing someone you cared so deeply for. Its beautiful and raw, congratulations.

I really like this. I 100% get the feeling of being lonely and forgotten. I feel like everyone does, really at some point. With a little bit more work, this ...

I think this seems good. It may need some structuring, but it sounds like it could be really good.