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Re: Understand Me
Thank you very much Suzanne I will dwell on it. And thank you too LilyReagan That is also a piece i liked as well. :)
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Understand Me
Yeah, I didn't mean don't review it at all though. I just want you to understand me before you examine me. I wasn't really trying to explain my poem I ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Scream
I wrote this at the beginning of 7th grade. It has no punctuation and a rough rhyme scheme. But for never writting poetry before this, I think it's sadly ok. ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Dancing Beneath The Moonlight
Panic at the rodeo pinned it bullseye. Good rhyme scheme and the imagery speaks well. The she's are numerous but, when I think about it, they fit pretty well. A ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Tears of My Own Exhausted Soul
Yeah, I thought so too. I wrote this a LONG time ago. I'm trying to start from the beginning of my writing to now (which will take forever, Over 200 ...
May 20, 2008