JumpyDot

Hey there everyone! For those of you dropping a review 'ere, I'd like to learn what you think about these things. -The Setting: What do you think of the pitch ...

Excellent as usual. Keep up the good work! :D

Your welcome! I hope it helped some!

Thanks! The first two points are due to the characters voice, but the last one is valid, however Sheldon still uses his computer. So yeah.

Everyone and their monkey's uncle have written a review about this, so let's get to it! First off, I love your characters voice, it's very unique among the unwashed masses ...

Thanks! I do have a writing group I meet up with that pointed these mistakes out to me last Thursday, however I don't typically wait to take this quickies to ...

Cool. Hope it does!

Thanks for the review! Now if you want to fix your computer there is a few ways of doing it. The way I fixed mine was this: Shut down your ...

I'm still laughing. That was good and hilarious. Very fun to read that dialogue exercise! It was funny, furious, and fast paced. I especially liked the end, when you broke ...

Just a quick BTW to everyone, good ol' John isn't going to be a main viewpoint character, I simply wanted to write the Desolation sequence. xD It'll make sense later.

Thanks! I don't think a setting would do this story good though, as the purpose was to have the feel of the (notebook?) Kind of like a love letter to ...

You're welcome. Hope to see more from you soon!

Also, I wanted it to feel like his laptop got a disease, and the original draft didn't do that for me. Kind of like a very loose version of TFiOS ...

Well, I don't think it was published, but in the original draft he did act like it was a gf breaking up with him. Also, the battery (from personal experience) ...

What? [/I]lalallala[/I]