JudyG710

Quite honestly, I was a little scared reading this. The thoughts mentioned here are not particularly ideal... Though, it's still good in the sense that it's emotional, and it makes ...

Achuta. :) Overall, I think you have a pretty good story on your hands. I like how you managed to take a children's TV show and incorporate it and its ...

A wonderful continuation to a seemingly great story. Quite honestly, I don't have much to write about. It was well-written with those very few grammatical errors. I liked the beginning. ...

Hello. First, I would like to point out that you did not need the apostrophe in "horse's". You are trying to make it plural, so the apostrophe is not needed. ...

I really do like the story. The concept is great, and I like the characters and the descriptions that were in there. The beginning line I had a minor problem ...

Achuta. I'm not sure if you remember me. I made a comment on your Anakin picture. I'm back! :D Well, I must first of all point out that I actually ...

Nice job Justagirl. I know a few people who go horseback riding. It seems fun, but I've never tried it. That's not important though. I liked that you not only ...

Achuta Misfit. (Means hello. I'm such a geek. :D) Anyway, you said you wanted a review, so here's one for you. I found this work to be incredible! Quite honestly, ...

Yes, that does appear to be a good start to a novel. :) If this has any indication to the actual story, I can't wait to read it. :D Though, ...

Amazing! I had to start off with that, cause it's true. You wrote an amazing lyric. I loved reading it, and I bet you loved writing it. :) How old ...

Hello. I shall start off with saying that this was incredible! It was deep and sad and emotional and much more. I do agree it was kinda long, but "size ...

I found this kinda funny to read actually. I mean, I never thought of "bi-polar love" meaning you'd continuously want to kill the one you love. I find it a ...

Wow. This was incredible! Truly, I found it very entertaining, deep, and emotional. I found one grammar/spelling error. That first line in the paragraph, "A pessimists cannot have friends." There ...

Overall, I kind of liked this piece. It was a good extension to an incredible story. It was pretty descriptive, though I found quite the number of grammar errors, as ...

I read Romeo and Juliet last year in English, and am ashamed to say that I haven't read it again since. But reading this, I feel as though I've never ...