Published January 6, 2012
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A wonderful continuation to a seemingly great story. Quite honestly, I don't have much to write about. It was well-written with those very few grammatical errors. I liked the beginning. The description you gave to the scenery. It gave me these cool pictures in my head that I love to see when I read something. When I can clearly see what you're trying to get across, that, to me, shows good signs of a great story. Must now wait patiently for next part.
Keep writing, and may the Force be with you.