Jpwriter

wow this is awesome I love it like I said your amazing. I love the little harmonica solo at the end it adds a interesting twang nice job

Thank you for the review ladybug you among so many others have been so supportive and I appreciate it so much I'm glad you are enjoying the story and the ...

thanks Tim this means a lot to me every time you review this and yes the furies are the same ones from Greek myth I'm glad your excited I will ...

Thanks wolf for taking a look at this, it's a great honor to have so many people looking at this and liking it. Thanks

Thanks Timmy this is a great help I will fix this up per your suggestions thank you

Illud est quod, it means it is what it is in Latin, my grandfathers greatest sayings I only began to understand a year ago I like the dark chocolate idea ...

Thank you I will fix those and will do more thanks

this is beautiful really depressing for me because it reminds of how I feel sometimes. it flows perfectly like a river. so enlightening it makes you think a bit, well ...

Great I can't wait

This great nice start and wording and nice job setting the scene. Please continue this

This is great kinda depressing but I love it. Great cliff hanger

Timmy thank you, you were harsh but it's good I need this it was what I needed, I will get this edited to your suggestions & thanks for reading it ...

This is a gorgeous poem that makes me smile and cry thinking of how my life has gone like this poem good job

This awesome & I would love to read more so keep going