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  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Story

    I like a type of story that is adventures and when they are tring to look for his parents and then they meet people dearing the journy It might take ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Magnificent Manhattan

    I like that there was a lot of descriotion A whirlwind of sound engulfs you the second you step out of the illustrious yellow cab. New York- an uproar of ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Mongolian Terror

    I like that this takes place in imperial china. I feel sad for on character to that died in the story He grabbed it and ran toward him to save ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: MY China story

    I like that you character of your is helpful in the story When I am done with my work for the day, I hurry home to see Shen Ya. When ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: To Live in This Moment

    I wonder if she could have not put too many commas in the sentences. I like that there was a lot of describing. I what I like it is the ...

    Mar 14, 2016


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