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Re: A Story
I like a type of story that is adventures and when they are tring to look for his parents and then they meet people dearing the journy It might take ...
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Re: Magnificent Manhattan
I like that there was a lot of descriotion A whirlwind of sound engulfs you the second you step out of the illustrious yellow cab. New York- an uproar of ...
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Re: The Mongolian Terror
I like that this takes place in imperial china. I feel sad for on character to that died in the story He grabbed it and ran toward him to save ...
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Re: MY China story
I like that you character of your is helpful in the story When I am done with my work for the day, I hurry home to see Shen Ya. When ...
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Re: To Live in This Moment
I wonder if she could have not put too many commas in the sentences. I like that there was a lot of describing. I what I like it is the ...
Mar 14, 2016
